I particularly like the tiny details like the Chief being amused at Lee, Kara quickly hiding her idols, Lee's cold terror at seeing Leoben's fingerprints around her neck.
And ending it with Lee focusing on Kara's laughter. Very nice! I imagine that if Lee ever got Kara for himself he'd devote a good deal of time to making her laugh (giggling and all).
![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
sforzinda
no subject
Date: 2008-01-17 02:11 am (UTC)I particularly like the tiny details like the Chief being amused at Lee, Kara quickly hiding her idols, Lee's cold terror at seeing Leoben's fingerprints around her neck.
And ending it with Lee focusing on Kara's laughter. Very nice! I imagine that if Lee ever got Kara for himself he'd devote a good deal of time to making her laugh (giggling and all).